Dion was a diligent and important contributor in the development of my novel from draft to draft. Aside from picking up a few crucial mistakes, he also asked important and challenging questions, always with a view to strengthening the story and how it was being delivered.
![Allen Stroud, author of Fearless and co-author of the Phoenix Point stories.](https://i0.wp.com/thefinetoothed.com/dion/wp-content/uploads/2019/11/AllenStroud-e1574595119791.jpeg?fit=260%2C260&ssl=1)